oh.
I mean, I've said before, but I can never get over your use of description and just OH. It's honestly beautiful. I especially liked the bit about the moon. I get the feeling that you do it with ease, even though there's a hell of a lot of vocab in there :O

Seriously amazing.

Also, even though I knew what was going to happen, my hand was covering my mouth before the end.

I love it :)